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PB Crying Over Finn by The-Bish-Of-Hyrule PB Crying Over Finn by The-Bish-Of-Hyrule
Stupid Title This is like the best drawing Of PB and FP I have XD I've been working on this for like almost all day -u- I dunno its just a random thought for this drawing XD
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The shading is absolutely amazing mainly. I love how you add a glare, shading, and natural hair colour. The body shapes came out well for an Adventure Time fan art, and is similar to the shows art style. Which is good, don't worry! I'm going to critique for each character. I hope you don't mind.
Princes Bubblegum: The colouring is good. Though PBs body looks like she is sitting/about to sit while it seems liken she is supposed to be standing. And where her arm is, the one by her side, the dress should have some shading. The shading in the back is off, there should be shading on the hair by her back and not a light part.Over all its good but you should try shading by her hair a bit more when its against her body. :)
Flame Princess: She came out very well. Even though this is an odd thing to notice, the lining of her dress is supposed to be a hot pink.
Finn: ...Uhm...I have a lot to say. First off How is he holding FP's hand? Didn't he get burnt when he tried to hold her hand in the show? She is made out of flames... Anyway onto his body. It came out well except for his right leg. Its smaller than his left one and noticeably. If it is like turned or something the ignore that. And one shirt sleeve is way longer than the other. Not that it matters much I just noticed it. And his hair...Its not supposed to be out. He stuffs it in his hat. And finally...Why is he blue?! Finn the Human. Not Ice person. That is the main flaw of this.Actually its the only true flaw. Sorry but its true. He is supposed to be human with blonde hair and white skin and blue eyes.
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joshuarmour15 Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
And you say you don't like him. *rips off hand and starts chewing on it* seriously.
choco-latte-squirrel Dec 27, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Ah, I still love FinnxPB. D:
The-Bish-Of-Hyrule Dec 28, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I do too! :dummy: But not as much as finnceline to be honest XD
choco-latte-squirrel Dec 28, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I like all of them, but I prefer FinxPB. x3
Weird, she once said, "I'm too old for you, Finn," and NOW she's cry? GURL THE HECK BP!
GirlyRainbowVampire Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, so awesome :iconclaplaplz:
She turned him down too many times to love him now, though :iconhmph-plz:
mrabudi Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
that's awesome! i can feel the feel
but wait i thought pb didn't love fin?
The-Bish-Of-Hyrule Dec 26, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Well I'd reckon she did =u= Since the burning low episode in the end Jake said: Jealous? :iconjakejealousplz: then she replies "shut up" I just reckon she does :iconharharplz: And its just fanart dun take them to seriously :iconstarepatplz:
ok... i get it... well good job! :D
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